So about the Duke, Had he ever felt like he was just a glorified peasant in his time around is ten sisters? ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" [Everyone headed to the living room to sleep together. "WHENEVER WE VISIT YOU WE ARE MISERABLE!" Trivia. It was wrong of me to blame you for my failure and call you bad luck! ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field. If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! it shows how badly Lincoln was treated by his family. WE RUINED OUR WHOLE FAMILY!!! Speaking of, I plan to do another alternate ending to another Loud House episode, the ending for it might have been wholesome and good, I just feel that the events that happen in the episode could've been prevented if the siblings did this, that's all I'm going to say. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! The voice asked. I'm calling the cops! It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. You're not even a real family anymore and I HATE that! Lucy shouted, "WE DREAD GOING TO VISIT YOU AND DREAD LOOKING AT YOUR GROSS FACE!" No such luck alt ending5. They were my favourite! Lincoln asked his parents. Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. Lori finished with. Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. I don't even care about that anymore. I pull off one little trick and you guys all flip out over some nonsense like a bunch of gullible buffoons! Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. She hugged him back.] And with that, they headed towards the lobby. I'll definitely come to your next game, Lynn. NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! I'm the Duke! We said we were sorry. This triggered events that none of the Loud House family could have seen. he turned to the three men, who started sweating nervously, afraid of what would happen to them if they didn't say anything. I will not be discarded and than used!! I can't even begin to imagine what they'll do their parents when they find them.'. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents. (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! No Such Luck, No Such Love is a The Loud House fanfic written by SpartanXHunterX which can be read here. lincoln. The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. Lincoln: I said NO! Lincoln: Enjoy your life in suits! Luan: Yeah, our luck has just run out! (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place. Lucy: "He's actually doing pretty good." Lynn: [nerviously] "Yeah, decent enough. "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. Lincoln: Alright, i admit! They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. You never let me have a say in the matter! I hate concerts! He brought the talkie down to his level and said into it, "Wait. (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! Everyone awed over this.] Lola: Me too! "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. No pun intended. Lincoln turned to Lori and said, "I think we should call Aunt Ruth and tell her how we feel." There must something we could do to put a proper spotlight on our dear duke. ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! ], Baseball Announcer: "It's goingit's goingIT'S GONE!!! And after that, the whole room was silent. Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). You took it too far! Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. Luna: I can't believe we made him feel as if we can't feel anymore or that we don't love and care for him. Luna spots Lincoln). Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. But in hindsight, I guess I should've thought about it more before lying to you guys. With how much of a hatedom Lynn Jr got after this episode, I had to have her own up to her mistakes. YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! Lola: *Gasp* My lovely car! Are you saying that our parents are responsible getting us kicked out?" Now, let me make this clear! Rita: You're all just angry with each other, when we get home, we'll talk about this properly. No self-insert oc this time. ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. Lynn has a bruised cheek and the rest are all still coated in muck and wet from the sea. Bad. Rita pondered for a moment and then said, "Hey I know, why don't we make a quick stop to Aunt Ruth's and" Her idea was interrupted by Lori slamming on the brakes hard, jerking the van to stop. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Please leave non-hurtful comments down below, otherwise you will be blocked. Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." I loved winning so much that didn't take my failure like a good sport, and started thiswhole bycalling you bad luck. "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." There's no need to shout. His sisters join too and put Lynn in her place. Lincoln: Lana. Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? There is the occasional food break, of course, where the reactors recount what they learned. ", Lincoln: "No, Lucy. "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. "What we're saying is is that you two are going to be confided to this building for the next 2 calendar cycles, only to leave for employment reasons or to get us sustenance from the one of our beloved stores." They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. Eventually, Rita broke the long silence, saying, "Kids, I know you're angry at us for causing us to be kicked out of the hotel. Just because of superstitions?! Felix looked at the door and saw a number 5 on it. (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" "Room 5," Felix answered with, "On the 11th floor." We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. (Bursts into tears). Lucy: So, that's it then? Because of this, Lincoln sneaks his way out of the kitchen, and next to the staircase. 2022 - 2023 Add to Favourites Comment They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. My team needs that! Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. Lincoln: "Did anything bad happen, something life threatening that I would be deemed 'bad luck'? You're supposed to be grounded to the hotel room, remember?" I'm not. Let me tell you this! We got your back. Im melting! "Aren't you guys going to help us?" I dont want to support you psychos! While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! Especially Miss. We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. Two more squirrels collide into each other and miss the catch. Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! You love baseball. Why? I do not own the Loud . As they leave, Jeffrey grabs Lynn Sr.'s arm, making him and his wife turn to him, he added, "And just so you know, your kids tore apart my lobby and the room you were staying in. ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." ", (Vanzilla is parked in the driveway. As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. YOU HATE US!!! Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. At least this thick skin won't let me down! I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. I hate that you all act so smart and serious and important when you're not! You just mess up everything! ), Lynn Sr.: "Get ready kids, we're going to the movies again, but Lincoln is coming with us. [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. Get me arrested. "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us." loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. [The softball playoffs. Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . Leni: *Gasp* My Sewing Machine! They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. The important thing is that we learn from them. Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. Now, while this episode is nowhere near as bad as "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck," the episode is still pretty thumbs down, especially with the ending. She said, in an angry tone, before blowing a raspberry her parents, covering them in her spit. "Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. [knocks Pep down], [Lynn finishes her run and gets picked up by her family in celebration of her victory. His choreography is so dated. Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. Taking the device out of the girl's hand. Luck. We didn't just barge into the room. "Do you have any idea how lousy you made us feel?" (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. In. I loved it. Our family wouldn't be a family without-. "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded.